When What You're Working On Isn't Working On You

Basically finished what I thought was going to be pretty damn close to what the final draft of "The There There" today. Printed it out and read it through and...it needs a ton of work. There's nothing more defeating then feeling like you've wasted a large amount of time but there's just something about this script that isn't working for me. I'm going to let some folks I trust read it to get their feedback, maybe I'm just being my own worst critic but I'm not going to make a film from a script I'm not 100% proud of so needless to say, I'm going to have a lot of work to do at the very least. Oh, well. I guess that's why Red Bull exists.